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2019 CREATIVE WRITING COMPETITION


               “THE FIRST COLD MORNING”


              EDITOR’S NOTE: Each year, the Oklahoma Department of Wildlife Conserva-
              tion and Oklahoma Station Chapter Safari Club International join to sponsor a
              creative writing competition for Oklahoma middle and high school students. A boy
              and a girl from two age divisions are selected winners. Students were required to
              write essays using the theme “Hunting: Sharing the Heritage” or “Archery: What
              I Like About Archery in the Schools and Bowhunting.” Winners in the age 15-17
              category receive a guided antelope hunt in the Texas Panhandle, and winners in the
              11-14 age category receive a hunting trip at the Circle P Pogue Ranch (or similar)
              and a scholarship to the Outdoor Texas Camp. In this issue, Outdoor Oklahoma
              honors junior category female winner Jesse Hardy, 13, from Maple Public School.
              HUNTING: SHARING                              was different. He kept staring out the window, never
                                                            looking over at me. He nodded his head toward the field.
              THE HERITAGE                                  I looked out and saw a big deer across the meadow. It had
                                                            its head down and was moving fast. Its tail was straight
              By Jesse Hardy                                back. The deer would stop, run a little further, and then
               I studied hard and finally gotten            stop again.
              my youth hunter safety card. Rifle              Finally, the deer raised its head. I didn’t need binoculars
              season was finally here. Dad said that        to see that it was a large buck with wide, tall horns. Sud-
              I better brush my teeth and get to            denly, I felt a shortness of breath. My heart was pounding
              bed as we had to get an early start and there was a cold  so loud. I just knew he would hear us. Dad leaned over to
              front coming in. That night, I could hardly sleep! I heard  me and whispered, “This is what we came for. Remember
              dad’s alarm clock sound and was dressed by the time he  your practice, you’ll be fine.” His words help me settle
              knocked on my door.                           down a little. I shouldered my rifle and found the buck in
               We left the house and drove to the spot where we would  the scope. I thought he would never stop moving. Dad said,
              park. We’d have to walk the rest of the way to our blind  “Take your time, be patient.” The buck finally stood still
              that we built together a couple months earlier. It was still  and was looking back at the woods from where he came.
              very dark. Dad gave me a green light to see when I walked,  I took the safety off my gun and slowly moved my finger
              but I stayed close to him so he could see too. We got to the  toward the trigger.
              blind and felt much colder than the day before. The sun   Heart still pounding, I took the shot. I knew I fired my
              finally started to come up, and I could see patches of light  gun because I heard the report of the rifle but never felt the
              fog rolling across the meadow.                kick of the gun that had bruised my shoulder many times
               The morning light began to cast shadows over the field,  before in practice. The deer hunched up then kicked like
              and it seemed that everything looked like a deer. I had my  a rodeo horse. He took off running back the way he came.
              binoculars up and looking everywhere. I could see my dad  I thought I missed until dad whispered with excitement,
              occasionally chuckle. He told me, “Don’t look for vertical  “You got him son!”
              line, like a tree up and town. Look for horizontal lines,   I saw the white underbelly of the deer as he went down.
              like a deer’s back”. That helped me see further into the  Dad said, “He just crashed. Remember to secure your
              woods right away.                             rifle.” “Yes sir,” I said, with a deep breath. I unloaded my
               “I think I hear something coming,” I told Dad. He  rifle. I sat my gun on the wall of our blind. Dad took my
              smiled and pointed to an old raccoon making his way  hand and knelt down to give thanks.
              back to the hollow tree near our blind. After a while, Dad   After our prayer, we left the blind to retrieve the buck. I
              tapped my leg and pointed off to the right side of the field.  was so excited. I wanted to tell the world what I had done.
              I saw two does, a fawn, and a small spike.    Then I heard my dad say, “I’m proud of you son,” and put
               “Not the ones we’re looking for,” Dad said, “but they’re  his hand on my shoulder which was enough for me.
              still fun to watch.” My anticipation grew as I watched   That was seven years ago when I harvested the 12 point
              them silently graze for what seemed like hours. Dad told  off the back side of our property. I’m 13 now, and deer
              me watching the deer would give me good practice with  season is almost here. While looking out the window of
              my binoculars. They finally moved on, I guess to bed  the bus, searching the fields and tree lines for deer, a cold
              down for the day. We spent a while watching squirrels  front came through last night. Once again, I remembered
              play, and an occasional crow looking for some corn. Dad  my first hunt and first cold morning I spent in the woods
              nudged my shoulder with his elbow. This time something  with my dad.


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